Enclosed: First drafting of first half of scripting.

Enclosed – The Trailer Script:

By Megan Sanders, Jessica Mann and Harri Evans.

FB = Flashback

P = Present Day

FB:

1: Close up of Nurse Cecilia putting medicines on a tray.

2: Walks into a patient’s room with the tray. [Only sound is the clicking of her heels as she walks down the corridor]

P:

3: Exterior of asylum, wide panning shot or zooming shot possibly?

4: Doctor [name] getting out of his car to walk into the asylum

5: Sitting down & shaking hands with the boy. Boy looks shaky and estranged

6: Doctor: “How are you feeling today, [name]?”

7: Shot reverse shot: Boy: “I’m okay.”

8: Doctors: “Where are your parents, [name]?”

9: Boy: Bluntly; “I don’t know”.

Cut to FB:

11: Resuming of Cecilia walking in with tray. POV of patient watching her from behind the door.

12: Cecilia walks to the window and looks outside, confused.

13: Close up: Patient [face unidentified] covers Cecilia’s mouth. Shock shown in Cecilia’s face.

14: Slow motion: Shot showing Cecilia dropping tray of meds, focusing on smashed glass and broken plate.

15: Camera shows the patient and Cecilia’s legs entwined, sounds effect of Cecilia screaming “No! Please!” Screaming as the camera fades out to a title [need to discuss what title]

Cut to P:

16: Doctor: Puzzled expression: So you know nothing? At all?”

17: Boy: Blunt: “No.”

Cut to FB:

18: Panning wide shot of train station

19: Cecilia handing over her baby to her father. Cecilia is dressed in all black, nunnery outfit. Her father in a smart suit?

20: Glumly: Cecilia: “Look after [name of boy]...”

21: Shot reverse shot, close ups: Father: “I will.”

Cut to P:

22: Meeting conference between Doctor and Head of Asylum [Cecilia’s father]: Doctor: He shouldn’t be in here, [name of Head]!”

23: Shot reverse shots: Head of Asylum: Grimly: “I’ve been working here as the head of this asylum for 25 years, do don’t come in here telling me which of my patients are and aren’t insane.”

24: Dr: I’ve studied many cases of schizophrenia, Sir, and this boy does not have it.

25: Head of Asylum: He does, and don’t criticise my asylum.

26: Doctor turns to leave, angrily.

27: Head of Asylum: And don’t mention the boy’s parent’s to him.

28: Worried expression across the Doctor’s face as he leaves.